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United As One

June 18, 2010
By JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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Smooth and full of youth are the young child’s hands

Inexperienced and not yet tested to completion

Full of valor yet empty of trait

But the elderly hands tell a story of the past

The lines are experience

They are empty of youth but so full of life

There will be peace once

The hands of the child

And the hands of the elderly

Are united

© Eva A., Eagle River, WI

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JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 6:39 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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Thank you so much!
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 6:37 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;il piu nell&#039; uno,&quot; (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)<br /> <br /> &quot;Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality&quot; ~Emily Dickinson<br /> <br /> &quot;The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain&quot; <br /> ~Kahlil Gibran

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Very true, and quite a lovely poem. It made me very happy, so thanks for writing it.
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 9:08 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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Thank you!
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 4:47 pm
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Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

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Love this!