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May 25, 2010
By swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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&quot;you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face&quot;<br /> &quot;no one ever drown in their own sweat&quot;

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Whipped around like a ragdoll
Can’t figure him out
I think he likes me
Then I doubt

His hair is a dark shade of brown
His eyes are warm and gentle
His hands are like dinner plates
His smile as brighter than the starts

When I talk to him
I can’t help but smile
The warm felling I get inside
Those crazy butterflies

Everyone tells me he’s not the one for me
But I think he is I really want to see
I love him but there is just one problem
He doesn’t love me back.

© Lindsay - Elese G., Phoenix, AZ

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swim4ever SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2010 at 8:51 pm
swim4ever SILVER, Carol Stream, Illinois
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&quot;you can throw in the towel or you can use it to wipe the sweat off your face&quot;<br /> &quot;no one ever drown in their own sweat&quot;

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Thank you im horrible at grammar but im working on it, thank you again for your feedback.
babigerl1194 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 11:23 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
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wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

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umm a few grammar errors. oh well nobodys perfect. ahah wanting what you cant have. very relatable.  loved the opening stanza