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Hoplessly in Love

May 10, 2010
By katielynn21 DIAMOND, Sierra Vista, Arizona
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katielynn21 DIAMOND, Sierra Vista, Arizona
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live as if you'll die tomorrow, dream as if you'll live forever

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We just stood there, me and her, starring at him. Both of us hoplessly in love with a guy who did not love either of us in return. We just stood there in silence knowing nothing would happen with him, and no matter how much we wanted him to love us, he never would. And then we hugged quickly and walked away. Both of us with tears slipping down our faces, wishing he was there to catch them. Wishing he was there to comfort us, but knowing he would never come...

© Monica R., Stamford, CT

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“And I would say don't go, but that is inevitable, so just promise me one thing? Don't forget...” I miss you Baby.
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