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I'll Shoot You With A Shooting Star, And....Nothing

May 10, 2010
By ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
21 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t tell me the sky&#039;s the limit when there are footprints on the moon.<br /> Love Always. :)<br /> When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don&#039;t waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.


If a star shot out of the sky
And hit you on the head
Would you notice it?
Would you not?
How could you not?
How can you not?
I shoot the star
Aiming at you
How could you
How can you not?
I dance through the ice wind
Pictures bluring
As never begins
But how could you not
How could you
How can you not?
I pray for a never ending never
Because it latches me onto you
Is that something you'll come to notice
Do I really mean so little to you?
How can you not notice
When I'm desperate for your attention
I cry out
I lash out
And still
Nothing.
Silence
Still
Cold Nothing.
How can you not notice
At least acknowledge me?
I've loved you forever
You ignor me.
I shoot you with shooting stars
Catch the raindrops for you.
I Dance between unseen boarders
Count the grass blades for you.
Do you really not see me now?
How can you not
When I shine as if I'm a star.
Gold.
Bright.
Dim.
Black.
Gone.
Thanks a lot.


The author's comments:
Wasted time, tears, breath, and life over you, and you can't even remember my name, let alone that fact that I even exist. I love you--you fool. Thanks for that.

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Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 6:24 pm
Phoenixx GOLD, Toronto, Other
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aha, i love your ending! its amazing! :D 

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:18 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

My favorite line: "I pray for a never ending never
Because it latches me onto you"

on May. 24 2010 at 10:36 pm
faypirate23 DIAMOND, Fayetteville, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Take the road less traveled by.

i LOVE THIS i can relate to this in soo many ways love it love u good job partner

on May. 20 2010 at 10:05 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
55 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

"I dance between unseen boarders","dim,black,gone,thanks alot","catch the raindrops for you",and "count the grass blades for you"=man youre good. 5 stars captain. they have to love it. they just have to....