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April 16, 2010
By raechelle PLATINUM, Guthrie, Oklahoma
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the way that i see it, if you want the rainbow, you must first put up with the rain.

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I dare you to walk in my shoes
First step:
You'll falter
Second step:
You'll stumble
Third step:
You'll trip
Fourth step:
You'll fall
So until you take those four steps
I take every day
Don't judge
Keep your thoughts to yourself
Turn around
Walk away
And be grateful for the shoes you're in

© Nicole S., Orlando, FL

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i hate when people judge me and they don't even know me
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xAllegria BRONZE said...
on Oct. 20 2010 at 8:00 am
xAllegria BRONZE, Singapore, Other
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Ça fait tellement du bien d’aimer les gens qu’on aime, que ça finit par faire mal. Je sais pas comment on survit a ça. Non franchement, je sais pas. LOL (laughing out loud) ®, Lola.

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Nice... good job.
Nikkira3 SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 2:42 pm
Nikkira3 SILVER, Colfax, Iowa
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I absolutly love this, its deep, its beautiful, but better yet its true. Check out some of my stuff i think you would like it. It has the same deepness behind it.
TamaraMari3 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 10:15 am
TamaraMari3 BRONZE, Mount Plesant, Michigan
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I love this. Short and sweet! Beautifully written:]
AngelikaSeton said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 4:56 pm
AngelikaSeton, Eatonville, Washington
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this relate to so many things not only what you wrote it for...
drowning-in-sorrow GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2010 at 11:08 pm
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this is a really great poem.
nenna said...
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i know how you feel. people always assume that i am quiet because i  am stuck up or think i am better than them, but they don't know what really goes on in my life.