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I don't care

April 18, 2010
By ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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ThatOneWritingGirl PLATINUM, Greenwood Village, Colorado
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Don&#039;t tell me the sky&#039;s the limit when there are footprints on the moon.<br /> Love Always. :)<br /> When the tides of life turn against you and the current upsets your boat, don&#039;t waste time and tears on what might have been, just lie on your back and float.

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How far away are you?
You seem to be drifting.
Don't tell me I'm crazy,
because I won't listen.
I'm not stubborn,
I'm smart,
I'm not clingy,
I care,
You're not true,
You betray,
I thought I loved you,
Now,
I just don't care.

© Myra K., Somverville, NJ

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For anyone who was betrayed by those people who had done them wrong.
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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 23 2014 at 3:01 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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I love this! :) In way, I can rather connect. This is such a powerful poem; though it may be short, it's still powerful and has a lot of meaning. :) It has so much, emotion and rawness, and just honesty. I just love that it has feeling. Thank you, my friend! For sharing this. :)
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on May. 10 2010 at 6:07 pm
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I really like this peice. "i just dont care" thats nice. its always nice to know someone doesnt care-especially when they can say it in such a poetically wonderful way.  5 stars.
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 8:33 pm
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i really liked this. Tons of meaning in such a short poem. Check out some of mine!!!
Shahed GOLD said...
on May. 9 2010 at 3:15 pm
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I like it! it touched me~ I like how it rhymes <3 love how its short and it has meanings!

Check out my work, people that can write like you must have great comments!

Sweatheart SILVER said...
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wow this poem can relate to alot of people especially me keep up the good work