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My Fighter

March 19, 2010
By sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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You were there
in the beginning.
You taught us all how to love
and cherish every moment
of our gifted lives

Though you are no longer around,
you still are.
You live in me every day
of my life.

I am overly-proud to call
myself a relative of yours.
I've obtained much of my
coherent knowledge because of
your practical, logical, facetious words

I know you're always watching,
so I can freely say
that your presense is not
physically with us, only spiritually and lovingly, deep in our hearts,
never far from our thoughts

Your light will continue to live on in us all because you are
my dreamer,
my guardian angel,
My Fighter

© Ashley D., Philadelphia, PA

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My very special guardian angel:))
<33
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This article has 9 comments.

haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:48 pm
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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you're welcome and thanks i appreciate all kinds of feedback =]
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 11:08 am
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
27 articles 0 photos 266 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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thankk u very much 4 da feedback and i'd luv 2
haventy0uheard PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 24 2010 at 7:04 am
haventy0uheard PLATINUM, Kings Park, New York
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Very beautiful and touchingg! Just be careful with punctuation, but other than that great job!=] Check out my work and tell me what you think!
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on May. 19 2010 at 9:50 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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your welcome!  ;)
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2010 at 5:48 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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aww thankkk u it really meanz alot. i luv ur work as well ;)
BleedingRose PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2010 at 11:10 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.<br /> <br /> (mine)

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This is a very touching piece, I can completely connect here.  Very . . . emotional, (I'm in need of a better word) because it totally changed my mood, but not in a bad way.  I a happy-sad-ness kinda thing, you know?  You have talent.

-Rose

sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 3:01 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary.&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game.&quot;<br /> &quot;Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I&#039;m lying.&quot;

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sureee id luv 2 ;)) none of mine have but if they do, plz check em out.
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 1:24 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It&#039;s not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift

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Hey, my bud,

Sooo much more of my stuff went on. 5 more pieces.

"A Smile"

"A Perfect Night"

"Love."

"Precious Love"

"Bookworm"

Check 'em out plzzz.

xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 5 2010 at 6:40 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It&#039;s not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift

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awwww too cuuuute

that's sweet. i'm sure he'd be proud <3