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Beyond the Rest

March 1, 2010
By CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
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Heaven welcomes with open arms,
Hell awaits the victim of torture,
Dead, I am sure,
Blinding lights,have hypnotic charms,
Passing into the unknown abyss, about to weigh my sins,
Following the darkness,
In peace, resting,
Troublesome fears disappear, heaven awaits for me, I win.

© Whitney T., Glenpool, OK

The author's comments:
This started out as one sentence. Then was formed into this lovely poem, which I hope you all enjoy. The plot of this poem was just a glimpse into what is beyond death. We don't know for sure, but this poem is just a small entry of the idea of heaven and hell.
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Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:51 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,&quot;Leonardo da Vinci.

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I honestly love the poem and the way the words flow into another is just beautiful. Could you check out my stuff?
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:06 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Some things will never change&quot;---Tupac

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Very nice. Short and sweet. But carrying a broader, more deeper meaning.