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Lovely Dream

February 25, 2010
By CreativeScript PLATINUM, Port Hardy, Other
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Tasting those smooth lips, breathing in your irresistible scent..



And as they kiss, they dream..
Blocking out all of reality and avoiding the elements,
Fire, Ice, Earth, Wind, all blocked out as they drift into their eternal, passionate, dream.






Love.

The author's comments:
This piece of poetry was giving everyone a little dose of love. Showing the elements and physical actions, while love takes its course.
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Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:54 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,&quot;Leonardo da Vinci.

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This poem is very beautiful.:)
DreamerForever BRONZE said...
on Apr. 6 2010 at 10:15 am
DreamerForever BRONZE, Greenville, Delaware
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In order to love others you must first love yourself and in order to grasp all the wonders this world has to offer you must first appreciate what you have. :)

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Simple and beautiful! Great job!
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:05 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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I LOVE THIS! It's very passionate and delicate. Beautiful. Keep on writing...I'm a big fan.

If you have time, please check out my work. Comments and ratings are GREATLY appreciated.

                          ---Shernay B.