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February 25, 2010
By xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
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&quot;To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It&#039;s not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift

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I could hear the seconds ticking by,
Our time together coming to an end,
Quicker than either of us wants it to.

Time.
Time.
Time.

They say time is the only remedy for a break-up.
They say time is what heals the soul.
They say time is the only thing you need to heal the pain.

But what if time is what is killing you?
What if it's the time that we're apart that's killing me?
What if it's the time that's hurting me, tearing me apart?

© Becky G., Westerville, OH

The author's comments:
Everyone says time heals the wound, but sometimes I think time is what causes the wound.
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xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 8:47 am
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It&#039;s not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift

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I like "You're Everything!" It's a good poem. You're a good writer.
Shahed GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 5:05 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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O yes! I strongly agree,, time is hard to write about ..
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 5:04 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It&#039;s not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death.&quot; <br /> &mdash; Taylor Swift

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Thanks...

Time definitely is hard to write about.

Shahed GOLD said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 7:47 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;People are like tea bags, they don&#039;t realize their own strength until they&#039;re dropped in hot water &quot;<br /> &ldquo;People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.<br /> If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.&quot;

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1st to comment lucky me!

You know I always try to write about time.. to me it been something SO important -- and it really has value!

I really liked it! <3