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February 25, 2010
By Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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"You can hurt me with the truth, but don't comfort me with your lies."

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I'm a rock, a hard unbreakable thing.
The one you can insult and she won't even feel a thing.
The one who fights instead of loves.
The one no one can beat.

That was, untill I met you,
you swore the world to me, we would be together
now and forever.
You said I was the best,
that you wouldn't trade me for any of the rest.

But like any guy, you left.
You taught me a lesson I shall never forget.
To never trust again.
To never fall again.

Now I roam, the streets alone.
Waiting for you to come home.
I should have listen to my consicous.
And never to my heart.
But I guess I've learn my lesson, fairly clear.
To be a rock than a doll you can through around.

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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olican16 said...
on Aug. 3 2010 at 3:47 pm
thanks... check out my stuff?
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 1:11 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can hurt me with the truth, but don&#039;t comfort me with your lies.&quot;

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→Thanks for commenting and for the feed back :)
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Jul. 23 2010 at 1:10 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You can hurt me with the truth, but don&#039;t comfort me with your lies.&quot;

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→Thank you very much :)
poeticspirit12334 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2010 at 2:45 pm
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Wearing a Christian T-shirt, and a cross necklace does NOT make you a Christian. , &quot;For I know the plans I have for you,&quot; declares the Lord &quot;They are plans to give you a hope and a future.&#039;&#039; Jeremiah 29:11

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this is sooooo good!!!! love all of your stuff!!
Sill_Sitter11 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 20 2010 at 9:17 am
Sill_Sitter11 BRONZE, Milan, Ohio
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I liked it but the flow was kind of off because there were different amounts of lines in each Stanza which kind of... made it off.
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 6:10 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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&quot;You can hurt me with the truth, but don&#039;t comfort me with your lies.&quot;

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Thanks Sarah. Just thought of it and wrote it. Happy to know you like it :)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:06 pm
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Wow, I liked this! It flowed really well and it was different from all the typical love poems. Good job