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Digging this hole

March 2, 2010
By Clare James SILVER, Menomonie, Wisconsin
Clare James SILVER, Menomonie, Wisconsin
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Let that white angel take me away
Carry me to that happy place
For I am tired

These eyes, oh how naïve they are
What they saw was never real
Nor how I thought I made you feel
It was all an illusion

I am lost
With no signs to follow
Leaving me with no way out
But I want out
Just help me out

But you push my head in this hole
And let death take its role
When I am dead
My body shall rot in its own anguish


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on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:50 pm
KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM, Heyworth, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
From me: &quot;The Point of writing isn&#039;t so others can understand what&#039;s going on in your mind. It&#039;s so you can understand what&#039;s going on inside yourself.&quot;<br /> <br /> By me: &quot;Who needs you when I have these yellow lines on this road?&quot;

I love the part "Nor how I thought I made you feel, It was all an illusion" I recently went through something exactly like this. I think everyone has.

on Mar. 11 2010 at 2:01 pm
iloveyou... BRONZE, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Live the life you love, Love the life you live.&quot;

wow this was really good. "Nor how i thought i made you feel, It was all an illusion" <3 i loved it

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:27 pm
WaterQueen07 GOLD, Chardon, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Gerard Way: &quot;Hey, girls, you&#039;re beautiful. Don&#039;t look at those stupid magazines with sticklike models. Eat healthy and exercise. That&#039;s all. Don&#039;t let anyone tell you you&#039;re not good enough. You&#039;re good enough, you are too good. Love your family with all your heart and listen to it. You are gorgeous, whether you&#039;re a size 4 or 14. It doesn&#039;t matter what you look like on the outside, as long as you&#039;re a good person, as long as you respect others. I know it&#039;s been told hundreds of times before, but it&#039;s true. Hey, girls, you are beautiful.&quot;

This is an awesome poem. I can relate. I like the third stanza the best. :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 5:20 pm
georgiab PLATINUM, Whitman, Massachusetts
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"these eyes, oh how naive they are" <3