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Betrayal

February 24, 2010
By pudgydog2893 SILVER, Attica, New York
pudgydog2893 SILVER, Attica, New York
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"It takes a smart person to get all the answers right but, it takes a true geniuse to get all the answers wrong"


Betrayal is a strong word that’s used a lot
Even when you don’t need to
Trust is what we need but don’t have
Right behind my back you call me names
And my friends you’ve mocked
You’re the one who should be punished
After all you’ve done to me
Lies are all you know

Because of you I have few friends
Everyone is judging you to
Though your ways are simple
Righteous but yet crude
Although you still have friends
Yet they’ll be gone soon
And I know one day you’ll be sorry
Lonely is what you will be

But that would make me happy
Even to see you suffer for a second
Tonight will be that night
After sunset when it’s dark
You’ll pay for what you’ve done
After that you’ll have no more
Life isn’t what I mean


The author's comments:
This piece was inspired to me when my friend started talking behind my back to her mom because her cousin said stuff that wasn't true.

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on Mar. 4 2010 at 1:20 pm
pudgydog2893 SILVER, Attica, New York
8 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It takes a smart person to get all the answers right but, it takes a true geniuse to get all the answers wrong"

awww thanks :)

on Mar. 3 2010 at 2:48 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx