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January 31, 2010
By HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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"At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since." ~Salvador Dali

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Winter window only light

Sneer sneer sneer i hear you.
I'll keep that simple smile and sharp tongue I often cut myself with.

Ripped page with fond remembrance
I love the freeze and still dark night lights
Newly foot-printed snow.
Giving my regards to sleepy neighbors.

Ivy climbs my mind and stone walls, slate gray ones.

A fine lazy mess – my limbs lie.

Bottom right window flanking stairway door. Third pane on the left.

Lost thumbprint, lost heart, lost leaf. Like all the others, but it seems it means more.

Teardrop keys like a bobby-pin lock – pick. Once they dry I'm stuck.

Red disappointment
Sunburn creeping out from under my skin
It's been there for a while.

Spreading myself on these smooth pages feels much better.

© Claire H., Boxford, MA

The author's comments:
umm...this isn't really a poem. the lines have no connection except they were all written on the same day. i just wanted to clear my mind of some phrases and ideas and i went a bit crazy, but it was fun haha :)
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Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 6 2013 at 8:49 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
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The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened. <br /> - Thomas Jefferson

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these words just go amazing together. love it. 5 stars
HaHmAh12 GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 9:03 pm
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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&quot;At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since.&quot; ~Salvador Dali

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you're fine!!

i did get a little worried though haha
HaHmAh12 GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 9:02 pm
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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&quot;At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since.&quot; ~Salvador Dali

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heehee. it's mutual <3

chaotic mess is a pretty good description i guess.

but you're too nice to me...in the words of abigail "STOP IT!" haha
fzakeri1205 SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 6:04 pm
fzakeri1205 SILVER, Toledo, Ohio
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\&quot;It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.\&quot; - e.e. cummings

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favorite. you chaotic mess.. you amaze me.
sunnyhunny PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 1:53 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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omg i just tried to give this five stars but iclicked on the first star by accident and it wouldnt let me change it. sorry! i meant to do five.
HaHmAh12 GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 12:08 am
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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&quot;At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since.&quot; ~Salvador Dali

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THANK YOU! and of course i will! :D
HaHmAh12 GOLD said...
on Mar. 7 2010 at 12:07 am
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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&quot;At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since.&quot; ~Salvador Dali

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thank you so much! it seriously means a lot! i will try :)
sunnyhunny PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 6 2010 at 2:29 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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I agree, very creative. Sometimes the masterpieces are the words written without worrying what people will think. True, I can't find a theme or common meaning, but each line evidently has its own meaning and it sounds beautiful together. Keep up the good work.
calephchad BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 2:59 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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I like this. It's very unique. I give this a 5 out of 5. If you'd like, come and check out some of myh work and give me some feedback. Thanks and thanks again for this amazing poem.