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That Feeling

January 13, 2010
By jake2011 DIAMOND, Cheyenne Wells, Colorado
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jake2011 DIAMOND, Cheyenne Wells, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"With God all things are possible" Matthew 19:26

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She can make me feel
like the king of the world
With just the touch
Of her skin on mine

She makes me feel
Like the poorest man
When she’s away from me
So I call her
And tell her to come
Back to me

And when her lips surround mine
I explode
My heart races so fast
That nothing could catch it
It feels like suddenly everything
Disappeared except for
Me and her
Me and her
Me and her
Me and her

I can’t imagine living
Without her
Every time I’m with her
She gives me the best feelings

I’m gonna ask her
to marry me
Hopefully she’ll say yes
because I love her

© Liaz M., Vineland, NJ

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SmileLikeUMeanIt said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 3:06 am
SmileLikeUMeanIt, Tyndall, South Dakota
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&quot;In the beginning was the Word, and the Word was with God, and the Word was God.&quot; -John 1:1

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This is really great! It is sweet.
megpie000 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 8:30 pm
megpie000 PLATINUM, Marietta, Georgia
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&quot;Give generously to him and do so without a grudging heart; then because of this the Lord you God will bless you in all your work and in everything you put your hand to.&quot; Deuteronomy 15:10

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aww this is soo sweet and cute!!!!! i love it