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Unshed Tears

January 25, 2010
By ...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell


My eyes blur with tears I refuse to let fall,
My chest shakes with sobs I cannot release.

This strange wetness in my eyes is foreign to me,
This strange, almost overwhelming sadness is uncommon.

My heart is filled with what only can be described as remorse,
My entire body is nothing but a vessel for the pain.


The author's comments:
Comments and feedback appreciated! >.<

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on Mar. 15 2010 at 5:19 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

Merci, WhiteTigress =]

on Mar. 14 2010 at 10:35 pm
Midnight18 SILVER, Waddell, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;One cant live without the other&quot;

Pensivegurl...this is beautiful...I love it...I made a favorite on my page

on Feb. 1 2010 at 9:28 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

thanks! >.<

EmC725 SILVER said...
on Feb. 1 2010 at 8:07 pm
EmC725 SILVER, Western Springs, Illinois
5 articles 11 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The most wasted of all days is one without laughter.&quot; -e.e. cummings

wow! nice job! I agree about the rhyming, but never the less, I really enjoyed this poem! Very heartfelt and descriptive! Easy to relate to! : )

on Jan. 30 2010 at 5:03 pm
...PensiveGurl... PLATINUM, Aurora, Colorado
20 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
You get ideas from daydreaming. You get ideas from being bored. You get ideas all the time. The only difference between writers and other people is we notice when we&#039;re doing it- Neil Gaiman.<br /> Who are you to be who you are?-Le&#039;Na Pernell

thanks for the advice, fayrouz!

on Jan. 30 2010 at 4:52 pm
NorthernWriter, Fargo, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Only dead fish swim with the stream&quot;

i swear while reading this, my face contorted into an expression of sadness. i liked the part about being a vessel for the pain. this has good emotion, but i forgot how to do rhyme scheme and i really don't know how to help you make it better, but may be to make it more rhythmitic? good job ;)