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Love is pain

January 15, 2010
By Shy94 GOLD, Hale, Michigan
Shy94 GOLD, Hale, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
In life there are no failures, just personal experiences and one's reaction to them.


Love is Love
Pain is Pain
When it hurts
I'm to blame
In the morning
Sam's a dove
All the sudden
I'm in love



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Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 9:08 pm
To tell you the truth, I love the rhyme scheme, and the flow is very nice. My only problem with it is that it is a little bit too short, and I don't really know what you are talking about if I didn't have the title there...hahaha, I do like it though!

Shy94 GOLD said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 2:10 pm
Shy94 GOLD, Hale, Michigan
12 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
In life there are no failures, just personal experiences and one's reaction to them.

Some body tell me what you think of this poem constructive critisism please!!!!!!!!