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The Cardinal

December 15, 2009
By Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's only when we've lost everything that we're free to do anything."- Fight Club


Dreams...
Why can't life be like our dreams?
Why can't we fly
High in the sky?
Why is life never as it seems?

Music...
Why can't life be filled with music?
Children have songs
To replace all the wrongs
But, somewhere along the line, they lose it

The cardinal,
Perched on the sill
Flies away
Trying to reveal
The hidden side
Of life's appeal

He invites me along
To get a feel
Of the world he lives in,
A world unreal

Freedom...
Why can't the cardinal share his freedom?
Why are we bound
By our tears to the ground?
By our sins and unable to leave them?

The cardinal,
My friend
Flies 'til the end
Flies into the sky
To return home again

Pain...
Why can't life be without pain?
Why does God make
All hearts to break?
Why are we forced to smile in vain?

I follow the cardinal
To his home in the sky
I look down at the earth
From a world on high
I take a deep breath
I close both my eyes
If the cardinal can fly,
Can I?


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on Apr. 7 2010 at 6:16 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Very nice.Keep writing. Please check out my work. Ratings and feedback are GREATLY appreciated. Thanks

Holmes SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2010 at 7:58 am
Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's only when we've lost everything that we're free to do anything."- Fight Club

I just tried searching your name on the website and no results came in for anyone with "Noella63" as a screen name. are you set to private? cuz your name is in blck on this screen and I can't click on it now.

Noella63 said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 5:02 pm
well then click on "Work" or "My work" or whatever.

Holmes SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 8:21 am
Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's only when we've lost everything that we're free to do anything."- Fight Club

I tried that but it just shows me stuff like who your favorite actor and author and book is and stuff like that

on Feb. 15 2010 at 7:25 pm
sarahcarp63 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
51 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;The really important people in life have a way of coming back to you&#039;<br /> &#039;Good enough isn&#039;t good enough&#039;<br /> &#039;You don&#039;t have to be sick to get better&#039;<br /> &#039;Come what may and love it&#039;

just click on my name and go to my page and you view my work

Holmes SILVER said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:20 pm
Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s only when we&#039;ve lost everything that we&#039;re free to do anything.&quot;- Fight Club

i can't find it. can you give me a link?

Noella63 said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 8:45 pm
no problem. can you look at my work?

Holmes SILVER said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 1:16 pm
Holmes SILVER, Olathe, Kansas
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;It&#039;s only when we&#039;ve lost everything that we&#039;re free to do anything.&quot;- Fight Club

thanks I appreciate it. :)

on Feb. 9 2010 at 12:56 pm
sarahcarp63 DIAMOND, Denver, Colorado
51 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;The really important people in life have a way of coming back to you&#039;<br /> &#039;Good enough isn&#039;t good enough&#039;<br /> &#039;You don&#039;t have to be sick to get better&#039;<br /> &#039;Come what may and love it&#039;

this is a great poem but i think you need some other word choice more creative but you have a fantastic poem