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November 23, 2009
By beccaahhh PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Wishing with coins, blowing out candles, my aspirations died with the last shooting star,
God disappeared, my faith is gone,
my hope is now to far.

My love for you will not end,
as yours for her will not.
My unrequited passion leaves me gasping for air, my heart now goes from cold to hot.

I cant simply let you go,
your my idol; my hope; my star;
I see my meterorite-
I wish on it before it gets too far

© Gail V., Ansonia, CT

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