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I'm Dieing

December 10, 2009
By camprockgirel13 BRONZE, Jamestown, Ohio
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I’m dieing, Suffocating, Still crying
Waiting, for you to see
I came, For you to hear me
Call your name.
In the crowd, You stand out
I shout out loud, I want out
Finally you hear me, But its to late
I grabbed the gun, And it was fate
It was fun, But it didn’t last
Your smiled turned wrong
I fell to the floor passed
My life flashed, Before my eyes
I had enough

© Ryan R., Lafayette, IN

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Loveandboxing PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 3 2010 at 12:40 am
Loveandboxing PLATINUM, Levvitwon, Pennsylvania
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whoa . . . thats deep . . . i likd it. . . . but plz if your having thoughts about sucide . . . tlk to sum1 u dont wanna die now