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War Song

November 17, 2009
By Scare001 BRONZE, Tinley Park, Illinois
Scare001 BRONZE, Tinley Park, Illinois
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There is a time when at war,
Men do things they never thought before.

Bullets fly and people die,
Men that will breathe no more.

Men who were so brave,
Are now lying in their grave.

Bullets fly and people die,
Men that will live no more.

History is doomed to repeat,
As the armies lay in defeat.

Bullets fly and people die,
Men that will be no more.

We are doomed to be in war,
In this world forever more.



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The Nowackis said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:57 pm
A very poignant poem!! Keep up the great work, I look forward to enjoying more!

kcastady said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:23 pm
This is incredible. Cesare, you are a very talented writer. Keep it up! Great job!

on Dec. 17 2009 at 7:54 pm
Cesare, we are sooo proud of you...You are a very insightfull young man...Keep up the creativity.

mpetratos said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 6:49 pm
I love the passion in your writing. I am so proud of you!

sasabella said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 6:44 pm
Great poem Cesare! It's touching and beautiful!

mmk1 said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 6:33 pm
Very impressive poem. I think it it outstanding and offers great insight. Great Job Cesare!

on Dec. 17 2009 at 6:21 pm
We like the truthfulness of your writing. We love that you understand what is happening in the world. We think you may be able to help by using your writing.

on Dec. 15 2009 at 3:41 pm
Scare001 BRONZE, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Feel free to leave a message and rate my poem. This poem was my first poem written and has been already published in A Celebration To Young Poets, The Spartan 300 (Summit Hill Jr. High Newsletter), and in a collection of works from my Writer's Workshop club in 8th grade).

ebaden said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 3:20 pm
Congratulations Cesare! The Creative Writing Club is behind you in all that you do! Continue creating!