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My hidden Sky

November 8, 2009
By TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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&quot;See in what peace a Christian can die.&quot; - Joseph Addison<br /> &quot;How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?&quot;

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I



lost my



hidden




sky, but



found



it in





the



rain

© Kat M., Rockville Centre, NY

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i like writing poems that make no sense, but do in their own way.
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ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:18 am
ellyncannon PLATINUM, Mexia, Texas
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That which we persist in doing becomes easier, not that the task itself has become easier, but that our ability to perform it has improved.<br /> Ralph Waldo Emerson<br /> &lt;3

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I love your style of writing! I love how you put those words together and they just flow so beautifually. I love how they guve so much emotion with so few words! *Favorite* :)
_AMZ_ BRONZE said...
on Jul. 6 2010 at 1:15 am
_AMZ_ BRONZE, Hemet, California
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"I saw a bird, but I gave a tree to the frog."

That is what I do with poetry like this...lol I cannot write! But you my friend, you can...Even if you do not make sense, your words flow beautifully together. I am a painter, and I am not so lucky as to have a gift for impacting words. Good job!!!!!!!

sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:30 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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So compelling. So much emotion in eleven (tell me if I counted that wrong.) words. Really beautiful. You have such a brilliant way of fitting something meaningful in just a select vocabulary. It's definitely a gift I do not posess... As you can see, even now I can't shut up. Anyway, you're brilliant. I love your work. Keep writing.