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My hidden Sky
November 8, 2009
I
lost my
hidden
sky, but
found
it in
the
rain
© Kat M., Rockville Centre, NY
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This article has 3 comments.
ellyncannon PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:18 am
I love your style of writing! I love how you put those words together and they just flow so beautifually. I love how they guve so much emotion with so few words! *Favorite* :)
"I saw a bird, but I gave a tree to the frog."
That is what I do with poetry like this...lol I cannot write! But you my friend, you can...Even if you do not make sense, your words flow beautifully together. I am a painter, and I am not so lucky as to have a gift for impacting words. Good job!!!!!!!
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 10:30 pm
So compelling. So much emotion in eleven (tell me if I counted that wrong.) words. Really beautiful. You have such a brilliant way of fitting something meaningful in just a select vocabulary. It's definitely a gift I do not posess... As you can see, even now I can't shut up. Anyway, you're brilliant. I love your work. Keep writing.
