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Naked

November 2, 2009
By xxbakerbabyxx DIAMOND, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
xxbakerbabyxx DIAMOND, Coatesville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"life will only controll youh if youh let it"


My skin feels bear.
His touch isnt there.
Even when it is near, feeling naked is what i fear.
Bleeding bright with dark intentions, all my senses fail feeling broken his smile my token to a better day but without him i am naked.
its shedding i can feel it slipping off my inside cover i feel nothing on the outside.
the inside is screeching, needing, seeping through to the out.
who could ever tell, most everyone and hes what im about.
no hillusonation slowly sliding off the surface of who i was meant to be.
all the words that could have been said, should have been meant, and havent been put into motion yet. im so numb hardly sure that my soul can take it, clearly tripping over the confusion of the moment, hes leaving yet again it all happens to fast everytime i hate myself more and more. needing to be the one who deserves him after all the effort but he left me feeling naked.


The author's comments:
its not really a blame poem i just gott mad when i started writting and i miss him so it seems as if i was pointing harsh blame towards him but i guess if i had to connect a meaning it would be that i miss him and i blame myself that i am not deserving enough but atleast i have him as a friend

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on Oct. 19 2011 at 1:25 pm
Scribbler-of-Dreams PLATINUM, Brandon, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Love isn't everything we want, but it's everything we need....

:( I feel for you.