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October 24, 2009
By RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
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RaNdOm PLATINUM, Davenport, Iowa
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love doesn't hurt. its the pain that comes after you love.

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daddy, DADDY!
look at what i can do!
i can be strong just like you!

DADDY, DADDY!
look at me know!
i can lift the weights up and down!

DADDY, Daddy,
i can`t help but cry.
i love you too much to see you die.

Daddy, Daddy.
why did you die?
Daddy, Daddy i couldn't even say goodbye.

© Elaina B., Waterloo, NY

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my dad died when i was ten. i wrote this about him
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