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Pressure
Having trouble looking, searching, facing, thoughts are quickly racing. Pros and cons, weighing some facts, it's time to see which one will last.
Walking, running, chasing, this heart is really pacing. Breathing gets hard, nerves get tense, it feels like the fear of running into a fence.
Rope is yanking, choking, pulling, wraps around a neck. A heart pangs inside as the mind whispers, "Go ahead."
A throat is hurting, screaming, burning like hell. Not a soul hears a single yell. Time stands still, freezes in place. Now it's time to step away from this case.
Stopping, thinking, doing, legs become straight and the rope hangs alone. Lights flicker off, a car drives home.
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and i am actually working on a poem right now in my creative writing class, and the poem has to be based off of words we cut out of magazines, and it's about how i feel about him. however, i think after i'll write one where i don't have to work with only words i find in a magazine unless the magazine poem turns out well :)
thanks so much :)
why dont you right a poem about how you feel about him? since you feel stongly it might come out really good?
and it took me a couple hours to actually write the poem, but i did edit it for about a week before i got the polished piece finished :)
and i'd have to say my favorite line is "Rope is yanking, choking, pulling, wraps around a neck. A heart pangs inside as the mind whispers, “Go ahead.”" because everyone says they get goosebumps at that line, and i think it really shows how the person is unsure, and really doesn't want to kill him/herself.
you had noone to talk to? :(