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October 17, 2009
By rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
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\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

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I long to be free, ill make it some day.
Writing this poem will take my mind away.
In the distance i hear a bird tweet its parting farewell.
I long to be free, just the sky and me.
Not a care in the world, wild and free.
Now im pulled back into reality.
How miserable reality proves to be.
Im like a caged bird, trying to break free.
How sweet it would be to break away from everything that breaks my heart.
From everything that threatens to tear me apart.
But for now i am trapped, i must accept it.
Though it would be easiest to slip away from the pain.
I must accept that this is real.
I must not slip away and never return.
Even though that is for what my heart may burn.
I must keep holding on,
If not for me, then for you.
Though im like a poor little caged bird.
Waiting to be set free, Ill make it someday.
You just wait and see...

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem basically about my life. I dont want to say my life sucks or anything like that, because then i would sound like some cray emo. Im not, i just have deppression issues, lol. However I know that i am not the only teenager in the world that feels this way.
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-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 8:34 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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i know. lol. i gave u my phone# on another post, but im gonna delete the post in just a sec cause of all the pervs. if you dont get it before i delete it, then let me know when you're on tomorrow and i'll give it to you then
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 8:15 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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im back :D
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 6:04 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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let me know when you're back cause i really wanna talk to ya.
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 2:48 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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yep :] :] :]
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 2:21 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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yup. lol :-)
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 12:03 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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thank you so much!!!! :D
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 12:02 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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lol...nice
dragonfan SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 8:56 am
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
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&quot;Death truly makes an artist&quot;

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Wow. This is really good. I saw you on forums so i looked you up. I love this. Keep up the awesome work! =)
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 25 2009 at 8:41 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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i changed my pw though so they can't do that again. lol
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 12:16 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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ya...weird,lol
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:41 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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i think my parents might've deleted it cause they have my password and were on here about the same time that it got deleted, but i've got no clue y they would've done that....
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 4:48 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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ya...same here :(
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 3:40 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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OMG. This is so stupid. We were talkin on the forums and then mine just got erased all of a sudden, and I have no clue why...
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 11:23 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\&quot;never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\&quot; \\\&quot;carpe diem\\\&quot;

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Thanks :)

I'll have more work up soon hopefully, i submitted some more yesterday and im still waiting for it to be accepted or whatever.
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 9:41 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

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&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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I decided to read your work seeing as how we have been talking in the forums. Lol.

Anyways, this poem is really great, and I would love to read more by you :)

I also decided to look at your interests page and noticed that we like a lot of the same things, which I thought was cool.