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October 11, 2009
By Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
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Sapphire_Marie GOLD, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"speak your mind even if your voice shakes"

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barely hanging on
wishing for an esacpe
this slow pain killing me
every rip at my heart
makes me wish for an end
one i shall not find
i am meant to live in pain
this i am sure of
the sun shines through my window
landing on my face
its warmth is comforting
the only comfort I know

© John O., New City, NY

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SagaLiSela PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:41 am
SagaLiSela PLATINUM, Boonsboro, Maryland
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&quot;I love you.&quot;<br /> <br /> Simple as that. <br /> <br /> Or not that simple.

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The emotion in this piece! Awesome.

I'm guessing the lack of puncuation was on purpose, which suits this piece well.

A very unique, and genius shift at the end of the poem.
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER said...
on Nov. 3 2009 at 7:38 am
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
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&quot;peace on earth&quot;

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this is really good and deep i like it alot keep up the good work and if u want check out my work and let me know waqt u think