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Wondering

October 10, 2009
By -Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible&quot; <br /> -Anonymous

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Sitting in the dark thinking about her,
Wondering if she's thinking about me too.
Can't believe I'm insane enough to think this might actually work: Not willing to accept reality.
Deep down inside I know she'll be just like the others, but I still throw myself out there anyways;
Hoping that by some grace of God she'll be the one.

© Angela F., Bonham, TX

The author's comments:
This isn't one of my best writings, but I decided to put it on the website because I believe that almost everyone goes through these thoughts at some point and time,and I just hope people can relate to it.
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-Ash- SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:27 pm
-Ash- SILVER, Redmond, Washington
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She wants to die. She wants to disappear, to be remembered no more. She wants so terribly to be forgotten, all her mistakes, all her failures, everything. Her name to be wiped free from all record of existence. Because is it really existing when you&rsquo;ve got nothing to show for your life?

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i can tootttaalllyyyy relate :/ but i really liked it! 5 stars!!
Supernova7 GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 10:14 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
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sad cute and perfect:) 5 starz
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2010 at 9:50 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Thank you!!!                 
some1overtherainbow said...
on Aug. 7 2010 at 8:21 pm
I really really like this. Its amazing.
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:51 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Sure Maddy, no problem. Thanks for reading!!!
Chinadoll BRONZE said...
on Jun. 2 2010 at 1:14 am
Chinadoll BRONZE, Dallas, Texas
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Wow! You just said in an artful way what everyone feels one time or another. That's amazing! You have talent! :)

Also could you look at my poem? It's called Dear Peers-Saddness. I would love your input :)

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 3:38 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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thanks Sarbear and Shelby!!! I really appreciate the comments!!! :)
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aw! i know exactly where you're coming from. this is sooo cute. kind of shows how many people really get what its like to always be searching so that you can sit and relax with the perfect person. :)
Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:23 am
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like i said b4, your writing is relatable. everyone can use your poems to know someone else feels like them
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:09 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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maybeme595: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the comment :)
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 6:08 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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LostAngel: Again, thanks! And sure, I would be happy to look at your work :)
LostAngel DIAMOND said...
on Apr. 17 2010 at 10:00 pm
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Again with a great piece of work. I would love it if you commented on some of my work :)
maybeme595 SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:41 pm
maybeme595 SILVER, Woodbury, Connecticut
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wow. this is really good. rly speaks to how so many people feel.
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 4:00 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Thanks :)

I will be more than happy to look at your work, and I'm sure I'll enjoy it thoroughly.
BrittneyCloud SILVER said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 2:31 pm
BrittneyCloud SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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I think you work is great. Mine doesnt compare but would you be willing to look at some of my work?
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 3:18 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Haha, you're crazy writerscramp :) (That was teasing, I'm not being serious)

Anyways, thanks... Again... Lol :)
writerscramp01 GOLD said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:25 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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its writerscramp second more "professional" screen. lol and work EVERTHING is better!
writerscramp01 GOLD said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 8:24 pm
writerscramp01 GOLD, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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i know i read this one already and already commented but i really like it!
-Kal- GOLD said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 10:51 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Thanks guys. I really appreciate your comments :)
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Jatavion! You are the best teen poet I have ever heard! Your poems are beautiful. Keep writing and don't let anything stop you!