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The Rain Falls Down

October 10, 2009
By silentlove DIAMOND, Perrysburg, Ohio
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dance like nobodies watching, love like youve never been hurt, sing nobodies listning, live like its hevean on earth -mark twain<br /> worry always about the distance and you&#039;ll never make the jump -alana marsh &lt;3

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As the darkness of
A million bad things
Fades
The rain falls down

As the sunshine of
Your complete perfection
Surrounds me
The rain falls down

As your caring arms of
Hard, yet softened steel
Hug me
The rain falls down

As your lips of
Compassion and love
Kiss me
The rain falls down

As the hate and deceit of
A million people
Cringes
The rain falls down

I cannot imagine my world
Without the steady beating,
The careful cleansing,
The silent dripping,
Of the warm wetness from the sky
Please, don’t let it stop

© Ilyssa N., New City, NY

The author's comments:
I hope you like this one! the rain symbolyzes the cleanising of the pain and suffering from a past experience and the love which replaces the pain. please, rate, commen, and enjoy :)
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