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I HATE YOU!!!
September 28, 2009
I hate the way you look at me
I hate the way you dress
I hate the way your hair looks
I hate it when you say my name
I hate it when you play your silly game
I hadn't had a chance to say, the way I really feel
I hated the way you broke my heart.....
But I mostly hated that you did it through a text
© Rebecca S., Coventry, RI
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This article has 43 comments.
swcricket98 GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2011 at 12:35 am
Honestly, I don't really agree with the other comments :/ I feel as if it's too choppy. I understand that it's free verse, and you were pouring your heart into it, but it's sorta typical.
5/10
blackbutterfly said...
on Dec. 15 2010 at 4:39 pm
niiice. totally luv the fire feeling in that wickd poem! lol yes itt sux when guys do that 2 ya. but ya gotta grit ur teeth n make em feel bad when they see you can handle on ur own. haha cuz frm experience itt works. lmao!
forgottenangel SILVER said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 11:20 am
I love this poem so much. you never know how it feels unless you've experienced it yourself.
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 4:22 pm
you would like my poems if you like this one. and btw this is an AMAZING poem great job
Jordyn:) said...
on Dec. 27 2009 at 10:57 pm
So real, because so many girls can relate to that type of coward who has done that to them.
Brooke M. said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 5:16 pm
hi! that was a really good poem
very good imagery
nice emotion keep it up!
very good imagery
nice emotion keep it up!
Skinnyjeankidd BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 2:28 pm
wow this is sooo live i hate that
SilverAngel SILVER said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 11:48 am
I Love the entire poem, but the ending is by far the best part!
FlamableFyre DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 10:44 am
wow, so concise byt simple. i loved it and i know how you feel, if this really did happen, keep up the good work, great job!
aRunningTourist BRONZE said...
on Oct. 11 2009 at 1:37 am
OMG! that was amazing. i absolutely love it when someone pours out their heart like that. i can totally relate to that. and im sorry that it happened. but with that negative came out two positives. a better eye for the future and an amazing poem. Good job.
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 11:23 pm
that was amazing. the emotion in it is really good. it relates so well to teenage girls that have had a boyfriend break up with them through text. it was really good. keep up the good work
blingblang4eva ELITE said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 6:08 pm
a good breakup emotion.a good way to recover from a breakup is poetry. so very good idea.
Mylifeforpoetry BRONZE said...
on Oct. 10 2009 at 5:33 pm
I like your poem, that's all i have to say
isaac said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 2:07 pm
i feel your pain
terez said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 2:06 pm
yea what j-rod said
me123 said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 2:05 pm
woooooooooooow snap
Juan Miguel said...
on Oct. 9 2009 at 2:01 pm
8 out of 10
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