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There Should Not Be Rejects in the Art Room

September 18, 2009
By StrawberryTofu PLATINUM, New City, New York
StrawberryTofu PLATINUM, New City, New York
24 articles 11 photos 13 comments

Harsh white tiles map out the room,
The light gray pattern is the mimicry of flaws.
Bundles of bodies hover in their own secret groups.
I lack-I lack-I do not know.

Negativity crawls in the crevices
Of the pale painted cinderblock walls.
If I like-they call “obsessed.”
What I do not-heads turn, unspoken: “outcast.”

She seats herself, centered in my field of view.
Four years of anger is too short for her.
Her eyes are fixed on me,
I am in a glass jar being analyzed.

I exhale and liberate the air from inside.
She was a vindictive friend, until I said “no more.”
I keep my eyes out of contact
As I step in the room.

People gather in exclusive groups
They never get it. They never will-


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on Sep. 28 2009 at 6:54 pm
Hollywog. PLATINUM, Mole Creek, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all..<br /> <br /> An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Ghandi

This poem is so AMAZING.

This is the type of poem that I aspire to write. You have a real talent - never let it go!!

on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:51 am
NessieMarie GOLD, Minonk, Illinois
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killer...(:

Molls.xo GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 7:26 pm
Molls.xo GOLD, Natick, Massachusetts
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This poem is almost tragically beautiful. The descriptions colored a pretty picture in my mind. :) stunning.

on Sep. 26 2009 at 10:59 am
flawsversesperfection BRONZE, Bloomfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The world is an awful, ugly place not to have a best friend.&quot;~Sarah Dessen

I've experienced what you're talking about in this poem. It really hit home for me. i loved it.

on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:20 pm
StrawberryTofu PLATINUM, New City, New York
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aw thanks!

Ampersand GOLD said...
on Sep. 25 2009 at 4:02 pm
Ampersand GOLD, Mount Desert, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;RedVines! What the hell can&#039;t they do?&quot;

That is really sad. I was totally transfixed!

It was good!