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My First 5K

July 1, 2022
By 3jiang BRONZE, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
3jiang BRONZE, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
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I’m tearing down the stretch,

I’m going to retch.

Heart rate’s racing.

My lungs burning,

yearning.

My legs begin to tire,

The situation is dire.

The pain is immense,

This feeling’s so intense.

I feel my soul leaving,

My consciousness is fading.


Wait… It’s done.

I had finished the run.



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Afra ELITE said...
on Jul. 3 2022 at 6:19 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."
-Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Words do have feelings...Even the rhymes give out a different feeling...👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻

on Jul. 2 2022 at 12:50 pm
13bookworm4596 SILVER, Mantua, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay gold, Ponyboy." -Johnny Cade (S.E. Hinton)
"One moment of pain is worth a lifetime of glory." - Louis Zamperini

This sums up cross country. You have put the feeling into words.. someone understands!! :)