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Validation

April 7, 2022
By Kaylenpali BRONZE, Kihei, Hawaii
Kaylenpali BRONZE, Kihei, Hawaii
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Well, mother, ill tell you life for me is like a mountain

Trying to get on top 


Unequal

Negativity

Favoritism 

Acrimony 

Iniquity 

Regret 


3 sunflowers

1 daisy


Perfect grades 

Perfect life 

Future valedictorian 

The first doctor in the family


But that doesnt matter 


Constantly always brought down

As a result getting them higher 


My 4.0 GPA is nothing compared to his 3.85 

I will never compare to them 


But why?


The author's comments:

Hi I am Kaylen from Maui, Hawai’i. I am currently a 9th grader in High School. This is a personal poem I wrote about my life. I’d like to thank my family for always being there for me and my English teacher for this opportunity. 


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on May. 5 2022 at 6:39 pm
Kaylenpali BRONZE, Kihei, Hawaii
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@Afra Thank you so much! I knew at least one person could relate to this ;)

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on Apr. 25 2022 at 3:25 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Kaylen, this is relatable...You've used the perfect words for this poem...Great job!!!☆☆☆