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The Metamorphosis in Maim

March 22, 2022
By kyliesmith2905 BRONZE, Lambertville, Michigan
kyliesmith2905 BRONZE, Lambertville, Michigan
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When in pain and suffering

When we bear all burdens

Knowing no limits to our pain.

When in the pitch midnight of loss

When hope slips through the cracks in the damp concrete

Our mind seldom remembers

The rainbows after the rain

For there is metamorphosis in maim


The author's comments:

This piece highlights the beautiful side of pain and loss.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Apr. 3 2022 at 4:10 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

This is exactly what I needed right now...
The last 2 lines were really awe-inspiring...👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
You are an outstanding poet...Keep writing...✌🏻👏🏻👌🏻

Samhradh GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2022 at 11:13 am
Samhradh GOLD, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Dá fhada an lá tagann an tráthnóna.<br /> <br /> (No matter how long the day, evening comes)

That last line is utter perfection, it gave me chills. Well done!