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Vague Feelings

August 15, 2021
By Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me


I am here for a tired while

 with vague feelings I can’t put into words.

I am a vacuum cleaner

picking up specks of feelings like flower petals.

I am in the cracks where nobody goes.

 In the afternoon, we played chess

while drunk on spiked gooseberry tea.

We played chess

while buildings crumbled

and Florida cried for the dusty skyline

before the beautiful misty sea.

Florida cried,

Florida ran after the apple sun.


The author's comments:

I wrote this after hearing about the tragic building collapse in Florida.


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Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Aug. 29 2021 at 8:39 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

No. It was after. But before, creepily, I was writing a poem about how beautiful the buildings were, not knowing they would soon crumble.

on Aug. 29 2021 at 8:13 am
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

is this what you were doing at the time?