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Sky Eyes

July 16, 2021
By Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me


I lift my eyes to the water

Sky

Rain

Heat

Lightning clouds.

I lift my eyes to

Peace

Pavement

Miles

Fields.

I lift my eyes to

Windmills

Blue

Doves

and

You.



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on Jul. 20 2021 at 11:06 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

(actually i did make a promise.)
if comments are anything like writing, it will be there before you know it. 100 seems like a big deal, but its really just a number. wow I sound more philosophical than I am.

Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Jul. 20 2021 at 10:14 pm
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
179 articles 54 photos 1026 comments

Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

Thank you @sparrow for always finding the perfect special thing to say. You make riting worth it...however, you don't need to feel like you're under some strict vow to comment on every last little thing, specially if the piece speaks for itself. No offence, just don't wanna be a pain to anybody. I feel kind of spoiled rotten which is why I annon some things (so I can still be mysterious, whoo hoo.) While TeenInk shouldn't be viewed as a kind of welfare line where some people are robbed of basic love, I am trying to reach 1000 comments on this site. Huge goal, gotta go, got lots of typing to do. :)

on Jul. 20 2021 at 9:19 pm
SparrowSun ELITE, X, Vermont
200 articles 23 photos 1053 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It Will Be Good." (complicated semi-spiritual emotional story.)<br /> <br /> "Upon his bench the pieces lay<br /> As if an artwork on display<br /> Of gears and hands<br /> And wire-thin bands<br /> That glisten in dim candle play." -Janice T., Clockwork[love that poem, dont know why, im not steampunk]

the shortness of the lines is captivating.