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A psycho is in my house

May 22, 2014
By PoetryGirl96 PLATINUM, Ramsey, Illinois
PoetryGirl96 PLATINUM, Ramsey, Illinois
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I ran into the closet and hid in the back.
I could still see him search for me from the door having cracks.
I tried to control my breathing.
I tried to control my cries.
I tried to pray to God.
I tried to close my eyes.
He opened up the closet
but there was no light.
I hid within the clothes.
I am still out of sight.
Then I heard him breathing as he got in the closet space.
That's when I felt my heart pound, beat, skip and Race.
He was right next to me as he closed the closet door. I had a sick feeling while leaning against the drawer
I couldn't breath anymore.
I don't want him to hear me.
Does he know I am in here too?
a psycho is in my house with me and I don't know what to do.



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on May. 30 2014 at 6:32 pm
raysofsunshine GOLD, Lakebay, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"It's not about the happy ending, it's about the story."

That was scary, it got my heart racing, you should add more onto it, it made me want to know what was going to happen! If you could read my poem On the mountain or my haiku Pink Rain and write a comment or vote on it, that would be great! Good job on this piece of work and I hope that you will be able to check out some of mine!