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Alone In The Corner

March 15, 2012
By Special-Ice-Apples GOLD, Pinedale, Arizona
Special-Ice-Apples GOLD, Pinedale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love is just a word until someone special comes along and gives it a meaning.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;I love walking in the rain, &#039;cause then no one can tell I&#039;m crying.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Anyone who says sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain.&quot;


Little blind girl in the corner at home

Someone cries "Fire!" and I'm left alone

On the night I could have shown bravery

In the corner all alone you left me

I could smell something strange and I yelled for you

You never came to help and I felt something new

I felt my skin scorching, my mouth filled with grit

I fell down on the floor in a fit

My clothes burned off and I screamed once more

Why did you never come to the door?

That night when you came to find the remains

I was in heaven as it started to rain

On the night I was killed in my home

During a fire, sad and alone

You could have saved me, I know

Why did you not come when I yelled so?

If the time comes again when you run from me

I'll remember that at least I had the courage to scream

I could have grown up to be somebody great

If it weren't for that unlucky twist of fate

If only you had run through to see
If anyone was alive, you could have saved me



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Honour SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2012 at 5:19 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13<br /> <br /> &quot;Give me liberty or give me death!&quot; ~Patrick Henry<br /> <br /> Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6<br /> <br /> &quot;I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery&quot; ~ Thomas Jefferson

Great Job, Liberty!!  It's very well written peopme and has good imagery.

Clg1688 said...
on Apr. 6 2012 at 3:05 pm
Clg1688, Tucson, Arizona
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I really like this.

I getting a scent of regret and desire here.

Love it :)


Keesh BRONZE said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:29 pm
Keesh BRONZE, Baltimore, Maryland
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;m dishonest. And a dishonest man you can always trust to be dishonest. Honestly. It&#039;s the honest ones you need to watch out for, because you never know when they&#039;re going to do something incredibly... Stupid!&quot; -Johnny Depp (Captain Jack Sparrow)

Wow! thats beautiful, and intense. I really like it! nice imagery and expression for feelings! keep it up!