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January 6, 2010
By hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
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hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
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it is what it is<br /> &amp;&amp;<br /> dance like EVERYBODY is watching

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Its not like I can stop,
I can’t just leave it all behind,
I know I can’t tell anybody,
but I can’t get it off my mind,

I haunts me like a ghost,
hangs over me like a storm,
but somehow you can’t see it,
beneath this act that I perform.

I’m such a hypocrite,
a liar, a horrible friend,
but I’m too scared to tell you,
scared our friendship will end.

We’re going in circles,
my life’s become a carousel,
I want so badly to just get off,
to escape this living hell.

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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Mandy22 GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2013 at 10:03 am
Mandy22 GOLD, Apollo, Pennsylvania
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&quot;True love will triumph in the end - which may or may not be a lie, but if it is a lie, then it&#039;s the most beautiful lie we have.&quot;

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So metaphoric! I love it!
Elizabeth-of-rohan PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 29 2013 at 3:30 pm
Elizabeth-of-rohan PLATINUM, Abbeville, Louisiana
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Pain is stronger than life, stronger than death, love, loyalty, duty.<br /> ~Essad Bey<br /> <br /> &quot;you are tired (i think) of the puzzle of living and doing; and so am i. come with me, then, and we&rsquo;ll leave it far and far away&mdash;&quot; - e.e. cummings

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wow. so good!
hail97 said...
on Sep. 10 2012 at 3:58 pm
hail97, Carlisle, Pennsylvania
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

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Wonderful poem! So relatable.
shark SILVER said...
on Jul. 28 2012 at 7:31 pm
shark SILVER, Huber Heights, Ohio
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I can totaly relate to this. This had always been my life. this is a amzing poem i love it because it speaks to me.
LunaIsNotHere BRONZE said...
on Jun. 27 2012 at 7:18 pm
LunaIsNotHere BRONZE, Phoenix, Arizona
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&quot;I admire the concept of selling your soul for the sake of an unforgettable performance&quot;

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This is my life summed up in a poem! Thanks for sharing, and I could totally relate!
BlackCloudsLover SILVER said...
on May. 1 2012 at 8:02 am
BlackCloudsLover SILVER, Waterford, Wisconsin
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&quot;I am imagination. I can see what the eyes cannot see. I can hear what the ears cannot hear. I can feel what the heart cannot feel.&quot;

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I really liked your poem! It had a lot of great rhythm and similies. I really liked the "It haunts me like a ghost" simile. Keep writing!
Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 7:43 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Now Cinderella don&#039;t you go to sleep, it&#039;s such a bitter form of refuge, oh don&#039;t you know the kingdom&#039;s under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

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I really like this and I love the metaphor of life to a carousel... great poem and the emotions are displayed amazingly.

Check out my work if you get the chance?

savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 12:14 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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wow, i'm speechless, this is really good, i can feel the heartbreak just reading it.
inkers GOLD said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:22 pm
inkers GOLD, Midland, Texas
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&quot;And the lamplight gloating o&#039;er him threw his shadow on the floor... and my soul from out that shadow... shall be lifted, nevermore!&quot; - Poe

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Very powerful! I could feel your emotion.
AndySixxLover GOLD said...
on May. 10 2011 at 7:13 pm
AndySixxLover GOLD, Weatherford, Texas
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These violent delights have violent ends and in there triumph die like fire and powder in witch their kiss consume

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Really deep really good!!!
soccer28 GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 2011 at 8:02 pm
soccer28 GOLD, Setauket, New York
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unbelievable! i wish i had this in me, maybe i will find it like you have!
sunnyhunny PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:05 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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&quot;An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.&quot;<br /> -Ghandi

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I really like how you didn't just flat out tell the reader every detail.  It makes the poem so much more powerful!
justsmileanddance PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 3:54 pm
justsmileanddance PLATINUM, Montgomery, Alabama
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this was amazing!!! perfectly written!!!
QTpie711 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2010 at 10:41 am
QTpie711 BRONZE, Commack, New York
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this is great!!! i love rhyming poems!!!
forevernotthinkingstraight SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2010 at 3:44 pm
forevernotthinkingstraight SILVER, Terrell, Texas
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&ldquo;We should all start to live before we get too old. Fear is stupid. So are regrets.&rdquo; <br /> ― Marilyn Monroe

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Wow this is amazing!
pnkninja11 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 3 2010 at 7:41 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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I think we all experience this at least once through out our lifetime. We are afraid to tell our friends because we are scared they won't like us anymore. I never really resolved my situation and kept it quiet but that was a terrible feeling to keep it inside.
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 4:10 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
11 articles 4 photos 69 comments

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it is what it is<br /> &amp;&amp;<br /> dance like EVERYBODY is watching

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Thank you so much and I will check out your work now! :D
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 5 2010 at 12:31 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don&#039;t worry be happy! :)

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I love how the title completes your poem...it gives you chills. It def captures the essense of living a lie! Amazing! If you have a chance, check out my work sometime?
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 5:52 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
it is what it is<br /> &amp;&amp;<br /> dance like EVERYBODY is watching

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Thank you! And I will get right on that!
hbananabread93 GOLD said...
on Jul. 30 2010 at 5:51 pm
hbananabread93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
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it is what it is<br /> &amp;&amp;<br /> dance like EVERYBODY is watching

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate those kind words! But I am sorry to hear that you go through it. :-