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I Wish, I Wish.

October 1, 2009
By carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
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carlytracz PLATINUM, Manhattan, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We allow ourselves to dream without fear of how impossible it may seem.&quot; -Z.H.<br /> &quot;Anything other than yes is no. Anything other than stay is go. Anything less than &#039;I love you.&#039; is lying.&quot; -John Mayer.

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I wish I heard your laugh right now.
Your smile, I really miss.
I loved the way you cured my fears,
and made it better with a kiss.

I wish I saw your face right now.
Pictures aren't the same.
I loved the way you held me close,
the way you said my name.

I wish you'd come and see me now.
You're way too far away.
I loved the way you made me smile.
Please come back and stay.

I wish you knew how much I cared.
I guess you'll never know.
I loved the way you cared for me.
I'll never let you go.

The author's comments:
I really missed a friend. I swear, he was just a friend. lol. This is not a boyfriend poem, though it may seem so.
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writer3499 GOLD said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 4:07 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;it&#039;s impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default.&quot;<br /> -J.K.Rowling

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This is super good!! It does seem like a boyfriend poem. I love it.
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 11:00 am
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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Ahhhhhhhhh I love this poem soOoooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can sort of relate to it. Please look at my poem, too!
Stefegg PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 9:27 pm
Stefegg PLATINUM, Maysville, Missouri
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&quot;Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world.&quot;

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I can relate to this. It is really well written with good meter. (:
smilemaker20 GOLD said...
on Apr. 9 2011 at 5:01 pm
smilemaker20 GOLD, Jackman, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Only those who dare to dream... will ever reach the stars!&quot; &quot;If it is to be, it is up to me.&quot; &quot;I am comfortable being uncomfortable!&quot; -Steve Nash

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That is a really good poem! i know how you feel!
heartstodust SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2011 at 2:02 pm
heartstodust SILVER, Edinburg, Texas
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wow great poem. same way i feel about a friend of mine. keep writing