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I wish
February 21, 2009
I wish that when I turn around I would your smile
I wish that when I close my eyes I would see you skin
I wish that the sky had your eyes
I wish that the sun had your lips
I wish that the wind spoke your words
I wish that the air had your sent
I wish that I was lucky enough to have you
© John O., New City, NY
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Kristen Whalen SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 4:18 pm
I've read all of your work and its the same style. Each line in Death begins with death, this begins with I wish. And your Room one was repetitive. I think you have great potential if you tried a different style
rootbeerfloat92 GOLD said...
on Apr. 5 2009 at 12:56 pm
I like how you are wishing to find parts of the person in things you see every day. It feels like you want to be surrounded by them when that isn't possible. Though the first two lines had a small error, I like it =)
edye p said...
on Mar. 30 2009 at 3:39 am
this piece is very powerful-- the repition in the beginning of each line is, for the most part, responsible for this. keep writing, you are very talanted.
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