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Faerie

May 27, 2016
By LNArtistries GOLD, Rainier, Washington
LNArtistries GOLD, Rainier, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest happiness is to know the source of unhappiness"<br /> -Alice in wonderland


You tore my heart out,

Left me to die,

But all I did was cry.

You heard my screams,

You saw my pain.

You thought it was a dream,

But yet you're still sane.

If it was a dream,

You wouldn't feel the warmth of my blood.

You would only feel cold,

Just like your heart should.


The author's comments:

The book City of Fallen Angels by: Cassanda clare inspired me to write a poem for the main character Clary.


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on Jun. 10 2016 at 9:43 am
LNArtistries GOLD, Rainier, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"The greatest happiness is to know the source of unhappiness"<br /> -Alice in wonderland

Thank you @Tkenns. Its only my first few submissions, I really appreciate it. :)

Tkenns BRONZE said...
on Jun. 8 2016 at 12:38 pm
Tkenns BRONZE, Des Moines, Iowa
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I don't necessarily think u have to change this one with the rhythms, because I like the way u wrote it

Tkenns BRONZE said...
on Jun. 8 2016 at 12:36 pm
Tkenns BRONZE, Des Moines, Iowa
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It's really good. You kinda have the rhyming in the middle going as a ballad witch is fine, I love ballads, just match the rhyming pattern with the rest (every other line). You've got talent and hope to see more from you :)