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Somewhere Away
January 19, 2009
Pine trees,
Yearning, reaching for the sky
Branches upward, like a baby beckoning for its mother.
Just lift me, carry me, pull me up with you.
Wanting so much more
Ignored, cast away
Why not loved and cherished?
Why do you throw me aside?
I'm not enough
Like on a farm, the runt never makes it.
But why are they not enough?
All I wanted was a home.
Uproot me, take me somewhere,
As always,
Where I don't have to be myself.
I want to grow, to prosper
To make a difference
Even if I'm not existent.
God, take me somewhere
Where the trees grow,
Where the air is bright and crisp.
Away from them,
forever.
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the_Horsegirl SILVER said...
on Feb. 13 2010 at 3:19 pm
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KittyMaiden GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2009 at 9:36 pm
thanks for commenting on my poem! Yours is really good, I like the metaphors you used, very relatable.
asiangurl... GOLD said...
on May. 8 2009 at 4:41 pm
hey...that was so awesome. i can relate to it...and thanks for reding my poem too. keep it up
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kissingdawn331 SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 6:56 pm
I can really relate to feeling like you just got to move...that sometimes you just want to run and see if things are better elsewhere. This is definatly a poem that people can relate to. cause everyone feels like this(:
innergenius745 said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 1:22 am
Wow i really like it! thanks a lot for commenting on my poem...you were the first person lol. your poem is soooo amazing i wish i could write like that. :) I love how much the reader can relate to it...it's amazing! :)
hornie411 said...
on Mar. 4 2009 at 1:35 pm
i luv this poem because i could understand the theme of this poem of feeling lost and lonely. i could relate to the pain of realizing it!:)
Christine H. said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 10:01 pm
Hi, thanks for the comment on my poem! And as for your poem- I liked it! Keep it up! I got a good feel for the emotion you put into your piece.
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