Thank you

I think you asked for help on the chat? I saw a few grammatical errors...might wanna clean those up. This poem definitely gave a good vibe - you're displaying a clear feeling towards dreams and describing the effect they have on you. However, poetry is more about abstractly showing what is happening or how you are feeling. Instead of saying something like "I felt good/They were bad," try to add more detail, and give a few images. Just to be clear, I'm not exactly a professional poet, by any means. However, it would be a more effective piece, in my opinion, if you eliminated some of the vague/cliche aspects("They make you feel good/happy") and wrote more for the purpose of evoking an emotional response.