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Don't give up on me
January 6, 2009
Please don’t give up on me
There are so many things I want to tell you
If you just listened to me, took the time to talk to me.
Do you believe in me?
I don’t know what to think
I love you very much and I want you in my life
I want to tell you about all my ups and downs, my hopes and dreams, my love and loss.
About who I am
Did I do something wrong?
I miss you and I need you just as much as you need me
I’m still your little girl
Always will be
Don’t give up on me. I won’t give up on you.
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This article has 12 comments.
lsp91 said...
on Nov. 12 2010 at 6:47 pm
Riveting!!! It really pulls at the hear strings!! I need more!
cas said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 9:46 pm
This is very touching les, i want more! :)
Uncle Sam said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 1:19 am
I am speechless...very thougtful.
I am interested!
I am interested!
Troubs said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 1:13 am
Great writing, very expressive.
Aunt Terri said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 1:04 am
Amazing Writing!
Very Real, it made me sad!
Very Real, it made me sad!
Tim said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 3:20 pm
Great job! There is heartfelt raw emotion in your writing.
Belinda said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 3:16 am
great poem! It really pulls at the heart strings! Keep writting.
:)
:)
Aunt Candi said...
on Jan. 24 2009 at 10:18 pm
WOW! You have an amazing talent for writing from your heart. Continue to love, feel, and write.
Kade said...
on Jan. 23 2009 at 10:17 pm
Very nice work.
Mom said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 10:10 pm
As your mom it makes me cry!
OldG-Ma said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 7:40 am
A very telling and heart felt poem. Keep up the writing.
TWIN#1 said...
on Jan. 21 2009 at 12:54 am
Oh my god I loved it. I can relate to it so much!! Write more!
