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Unto broken hearts

November 25, 2014
By ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited


I stare upon the screen with shock & sadness, 
For I never knew that such pain could be inflicted by so few words. I had placed my heart on the table only for it to be abandoned, left to rot on the marble counter top. In recollection I remember not a feeling much like a bullet to the heart, but like a slow decay, a gradual rotting of my soul. I feel as if a hole has consumed me, as if my Juliet, had betrayed me... But I still see her face & see joy. I still think of her & feel a burning love inside my core... But now this love is not without company. Beside my passion looms sadness, longing to see her hand in mine, her lips upon my own... But it knows that such things are but foolish dreams... I play back each move I made, each thing I said & I hunt restlessly to find what I did wrong... But to no avail. I her... All the same my heart  burns for her, perhaps with a greater blaze than ever before. But. Now I know she has no desire for me... Pity; perhaps... But not love... I bite my lip as I walk through these halls as I gaze upon a for forbidden fruit though my hands are bound & my  mouth gagged. For all she wishes

...."is to just be friends" 



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on Dec. 23 2014 at 12:02 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

Yeah sure! I'd love to help out! I understand that there are col-lab forums, but I don't know how they work. but regardless I'd love to help you out by all means =)

on Dec. 19 2014 at 10:58 pm
jesus_saved_me, Earth, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t let anybody dull your sparkle for Christ.&quot;

Hi. I understand heartbreak and I really like this. Keep writing. Maybe you could help me on my book "That Girl."

on Dec. 11 2014 at 8:37 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

sorry, the link doesn't work :(

azurelove GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2014 at 2:20 pm
azurelove GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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azurelove GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2014 at 12:20 pm
azurelove GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
18 articles 3 photos 21 comments
then keep doing your thing it dosent sound bad or anything im actually impressed you have such good grammer

on Dec. 9 2014 at 12:01 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

but thankyou for your advice, being my regular style I had not noticed as of late. I'll try to tweek my writing style in accordance to your advice :)

on Dec. 9 2014 at 9:10 am
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow <br /> -Ansem_Unlimited

believe it or not (& this may sound oldschool) but this is actually how i think & talk...

azurelove GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2014 at 2:39 pm
azurelove GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
18 articles 3 photos 21 comments
i love this but i will tell you what every writer warns me, use your own words,words you use in everyday conversations so you dont alienate your audience and keeps those emotions real.