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Dear Lord
November 29, 2008
Can you help me breathe?
Can you help me believe?
All i use to trust
was nothing but pure lust
Can you help me feel
CAn you help me reveal
Time passes by me
Still no clue what i need
my mind just needs to be free
of all the pain and misery
my mind always goes back to before
of those memories i use to adore
but now hurt me to the core
Hurting myself again
i feel no pain
i feel no shame
Can you help me now lord?
Can you help me move foward
i need to move foward towards a better reality
more real morality
god help me please
© Anonymous
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This article has 5 comments.
Hope said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 4:01 pm
this is my favorite poem now, its better than any robert frost or any other auther's work!
KatSev7venn said...
on Jan. 11 2009 at 12:08 am
Great poem. Even someone that had never felt that way before could understand how you were feeling. Keep up the good work.
<3 Kat7
<3 Kat7
BlackGirlWriting said...
on Jan. 2 2009 at 1:36 am
i like this, i can definately relate to it. i think you should keep writing and see how much you grow and mature in it. it'll definately get you some where. =]
sunnysmiles17 said...
on Dec. 29 2008 at 7:00 pm
LUV THIS POEM. personally i can totally relate to it. i think it flowed nicely and rhyming was great. keep writing becuase the world needs more poems like this. =)
