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Sublime

November 21, 2008
By Anonymous

So here I am in all this despair,
And you came to me without a care.
You make me feel so happy and free,
I bet you have no idea that you do this to me.
The way you laugh, the way you smile,
For you, I would run way more than a mile.
I just want to be with you all the time,
Because being with you is purely sublime.
It may seem just a bit foolish,
But right now that is all that I wish.
Take your time, but don't wait too long,
For this may end like a bittersweet love song.
So hold me close and hold me tight,
I will stay with you 'til the morning light.


The author's comments:
This poem I actually wrote while getting over someone I really cared about. I was terribly heartbroken, but in the midst of things there was someone else to help me through it all. I then realized that I was completely over him, and started to care for this new friend more and more each day. This poem makes me feel like there is hope for another love...

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poptard504 said...
on Dec. 10 2008 at 9:16 pm
OMG! Brittany i love it more than dana does!Js.I loaf u!

WTFdana said...
on Dec. 7 2008 at 2:50 am
I LOVE IT BRITTANY!