All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
Scars
November 16, 2008
Not all scars show
Not all wounds heal
Sometimes you can't see
The pain Someone feels
© Anonymous
Similar Articles
Previous Next
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This article has 3 comments.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Mar. 26 2021 at 8:59 pm
oh, on another note you should read crystal melodys poems, they are also dark and depressing and about pain and scars and such. you can access her account if you go to mine, i belive she commented on step into the dawn, interwoven wolves(1), interwoven wolves 2: the magic divide(2) and something i wrote about north korea.
SparrowSun ELITE said...
on Mar. 26 2021 at 8:56 pm
i have a single use character who would so relate to this. i think i do do, but way deeper than i can reach, like, at the blocked out trauma level.
quick note(again, cool poem, not to be rude just to help), you could make to lines rhyme. if you changed the wording slightly it could be
not every wound heals
and that would rhyme with feels, which could tie the whole thing together. just trying to help, dont take it the wrong way.
quick note(again, cool poem, not to be rude just to help), you could make to lines rhyme. if you changed the wording slightly it could be
not every wound heals
and that would rhyme with feels, which could tie the whole thing together. just trying to help, dont take it the wrong way.
