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The Darkness of Our Day

May 16, 2013
By HattyThePoet BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
HattyThePoet BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It will all be okay in the end, so if it&#039;s not okay, it&#039;s not the end.&quot;<br /> -John Lennon


Darkness surrounds
Like a black tomb.
Nothing happy
Survives in the gloom.

It eats you, chews you,
And spits you out.
It tears you, rips you,
'till you can't even shout.

There are unhappy creatures
Wandering around.
Weeping, moaning,
Yet, there is no sound.

There are no smiles,
No cheerful laughter.
It is always night here;
There is no morning after.

"Where is such a terrible place?",
One might say.
It is all around you,
Look, at your own dismay.

The woman down the block
Provides for her five kids
With nothing but a low-pay job;
It's a wonder how they live.

The poor blind beggar,
At your street corner
Is paid to go to funerals
As the single mourner.

Old Mrs. Larson,
(With the bad knee)
Can't afford a door and lock
With a matching key.

This darkness is very real,
As you can see.
This plague upon mankind
Is known as poverty.

Yet, this darkness isn't permanent;
Things can always change.
It can be turned to glorious light;
The power is yours to rearrange.

The darkness could be here forever;
It may not always be there.
Nevertheless, be wary, my child
To not get caught in it's snare.


The author's comments:
I felt this was something that is everywhere today, and needed to be addressed. It came a bit randomly though. It's a bit dark, but stresses the point.

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on May. 29 2013 at 11:23 pm
HattyThePoet BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;It will all be okay in the end, so if it&#039;s not okay, it&#039;s not the end.&quot;<br /> -John Lennon

Thank you so much. I'm excited someone enjoyed my work so much. The rhyming bit comes naturally to me. Thank you again, and you might see more of my work later on. Carry on, Hayden A.

on May. 21 2013 at 4:21 pm
Oh my gosh.  I can never come up with rhymes that fit in the poem.  How'd you do it so well?  I love how you tell about poverty in a way that makes it otherworldly, yet down-to-earth.  That probably makes no sense, but I mean it.  Also, I think this poem should be read at places where kids are learning about poverty, so they are  taught in an great way.  Thanks for sharing it.